If I would be the author, I would write the end of the novel in a different way.
" Charlie was in the hospital after for two months. He learned that he should not allow people to do wrong things. Especially if the people are doing things that is harmful for his own mental and physical health, against him. He had explained the worst and most effective things his Aunt Helen did to him when he was in the hospital. He was regretful for the thing he did to himself. He must had told his phsyciatris that he had an important problem in his life from his childhood. While he was thinking about his entire life, Sam and Patrick came up. When they came up, Charlie got happy and wanted to hug them. He was in a very emotional situation. They shouldn't came up right now. Then Patrick started the talking. "How are you Charlie?" he said. Like he said a strange thing, Charlie looked emotionless and said "Fine". Then Sam said that it was the time Charlie was going out of the hospital and he told that he got rid of from that area. Charlie prepared and they went. After some time, it was the time Sam must go to the university. Charlie was very unhappy and when Sam saw him like that, she couldn't stnad that situation and told the surprise. She was not leaving Charlie and she told that she found the best university in the city. Charlie didn't want her to do this, because her life and education was very important and because of him, he didn't like the things go in this way. It was a weird situation for him."
Here this is my Wordle of the novel:
I chose to make my wordle in this way. It looks chaotic, beause this novel's main character who is Charlie's mind is also chaotic with a lot of life elements like beeing teenage, the mistery that his Aunt Helen did to him and effected him in a bad way, his love to a person who is older than him and more. I chose the green, white and blue colors, because they look nice and natural with each other. Also, Charlie is a sincere and natural character and in this way, I represented his personality with the colors.
I used this web site to make my wordle: http://www.edb.utexas.edu/resources/booksR4teens/book_reviews/book_reviews.php?book_id=90
And I used this web site to make a wordle: www.wordle.net
Hi Senna,your review is very nice and creative because I liked the way you put the words crooked because Charlie's life was confused.I think you could add another words like relationship and depressed but your blogg is still really good and different.For your writing it was meaningful and significant but it was very long to read.
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